You have a really nice style, i like the many pauses you've made through the track, it isn't too overwhelming, it's a nice experience overall !
My favorite part is at 0:24, i feel like the progression after the intro is at a good pacing !
You have a really nice style, i like the many pauses you've made through the track, it isn't too overwhelming, it's a nice experience overall !
My favorite part is at 0:24, i feel like the progression after the intro is at a good pacing !
thanks for ur feedback i appreciate it^^ if u like this style maybe have a listen to this ;) its a lot more calm than this one but maybe u still like it.
https://soundcloud.com/flwlsspxl/exist?si=a7e413cb1f024e8b9173910fa4306698&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
You really nailed the chiptune style !
The track is really nice and feels like it has some potential left to squeeze with some more experience; the first note hits well, the transition to 0:11 is really cool, maybe try a low filter so that we can feel the upcoming guitar ?
The transition effect at 0:33 feels really smooth !
You've made a nice choice on your lead at 0:45 !
I'd advice trying to make it a teeny tiny bit sharper treble wise, keep up the good work !
Thanks!
The intro is really nice, i feel has if your song still has potential to be improved on !
I think that you're not that far from dubstep, it just needs faster, dynamic wobbles and LFO's that sync up to the beat here and there, i really like the starting "wow" wubs, you could do something really good with them in a drop !
It's a very interesting beat ! The voices are a nice touch at the start and make a cool melody, i wonder how they would go with some rhythm behind them ?
Thank you so much! I'm so excited to get my first review!!!! Thank you so much for listening!
As you've said, it still has quite the potential so far, but it's well made for something that reminds me of chiptune music !
Cleanly done !
The beat is quite clean and simple, but does a good job !
Perhaps improving the lead melody and strenghtening it could reveal some more potential out of your baseline ?
Thank you! I will admit, the bassline was a bit weak compared to what it was meant to be, and the melody is a bit repetitive and also a bit too chirpy when it was meant to be more punchy. I do appreciate the feedback though!
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