You have a really nice style, i like the many pauses you've made through the track, it isn't too overwhelming, it's a nice experience overall !
My favorite part is at 0:24, i feel like the progression after the intro is at a good pacing !
You have a really nice style, i like the many pauses you've made through the track, it isn't too overwhelming, it's a nice experience overall !
My favorite part is at 0:24, i feel like the progression after the intro is at a good pacing !
thanks for ur feedback i appreciate it^^ if u like this style maybe have a listen to this ;) its a lot more calm than this one but maybe u still like it.
https://soundcloud.com/flwlsspxl/exist?si=a7e413cb1f024e8b9173910fa4306698&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing
The track is really nice and feels like it has some potential left to squeeze with some more experience; the first note hits well, the transition to 0:11 is really cool, maybe try a low filter so that we can feel the upcoming guitar ?
The transition effect at 0:33 feels really smooth !
You've made a nice choice on your lead at 0:45 !
I'd advice trying to make it a teeny tiny bit sharper treble wise, keep up the good work !
Thanks!
The intro is really nice, i feel has if your song still has potential to be improved on !
I think that you're not that far from dubstep, it just needs faster, dynamic wobbles and LFO's that sync up to the beat here and there, i really like the starting "wow" wubs, you could do something really good with them in a drop !
As you've said, it still has quite the potential so far, but it's well made for something that reminds me of chiptune music !
Cleanly done !
The beat is quite clean and simple, but does a good job !
Perhaps improving the lead melody and strenghtening it could reveal some more potential out of your baseline ?
Thank you! I will admit, the bassline was a bit weak compared to what it was meant to be, and the melody is a bit repetitive and also a bit too chirpy when it was meant to be more punchy. I do appreciate the feedback though!
Lonely french introvert
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